So the NG YouTube account finally posted something that isn't 3 minutes up-close and personal with Brandon's face. Gonna copy and paste what I said in the comments about it. Overall it was done pretty well, aside from basic mistakes and a somewhat generic feel. Pretty good for a first review. -Keep your bullet points concise. The longer they are, the more mistakes you'll make, and the more it'll distract from what you're saying and showing. Try to communicate key points with the minimum amount of words. Example: "gorgeous visuals, smooth 60FPS". You don't need to write complete sentences. -Video felt a bit on the long side for me, I find the ideal length for reviews is 5-8 minutes, but this may just be a personal preference. -Review doesn't really make it clear how long the game actually is. Try to include things such as length, alternate endings, whether or not the original Japanese voice track is included, the performance of voice actors, et cetera. -When you gave the score, you didn't really make it clear whether you enjoyed the game or not and how much. Go ahead and explicitly state whether or not you had fun playing the game and briefly go over where it lost/gain points. -Going forward, try to make the reviews more Niche Gamer-y. I guess an obvious suggestion would be to have Mika present some of the info (holding the review score on a white sign, or cheering on a high score/crying over a low score, etc...), but there's a lot that could be done. Try to structure and 'decorate' the reviews in such a way that the viewer is frequently reminded that this is an NG review.